Screenwriting 101

Well I always say that you need to show and not tell. Rob sent me a link to the following video and it is a brilliant exercise in show don't tell. What is wrong with 'The Phantom Menace'?



It's officially a part of my new curriculum.

Linked from Gizmodo...

Wow. Verbatim cliche writing. Some might say lazy writing (although it would be cool if we could enhance crappy video).